Backwaters whispered in my ears
A song of lust, love and lustrous
Palm leaves repeated the lines
To exchange a gift for my Princess
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The imagery and the narrative create a magic in the form of lovely romantic atmosphere which is witness to a grand alliance of two lovers. Great poem. Thanks.
its a melody played by a noble flutist, awestruck by the flow of words, thanks poet
A gift of love with the joy of the heart! Thanks for sharing.
'Mountains smiled slightly pouring snow Dale hugged in surprise with flowers Sky screened in blue with rainbow Wind embarrassed me slightly and tightly ' how these lines could expresse one's thought so beautifully! thanks Sekhara Pookkat!
When heart is filled with love a torrent flow starts from the inner soul without knowing anything in front of me.
Stay away from the backwaters lest they tempt you again With the mind willing and body wanting And fail in the real bargain....... Thought provoking and good poem Sir. I invite you to my page too for critical comments please
A lovely verse! She is loved passionately! Dorothy Singing Still
A beautiful poem of friendship and love. 'Her heyday of youth Made my old lyre active' And you played the symphony so well!
With great depth of feelings so beautifully expressed for friendship day!
The love song played on your lyre is beautiful and the exchange of ring has sealed the bond! !
Backwaters whispered in my ears The ring finger should not be empty/// what a touching and lovely line.. it melts my heart and whispers don't forget to comment..thanks for your wonderful words on my new poem.. thanks a lot
a great friendship poem and a well versed msg too enjoyed reading it
something that flows like a stream and never stops giving never desires to receive anything in return that is pure love and sir every time i read your poem thats all i witness bravo sir
A beautifully expressed poem Sekharan, I loved it.