Thursday, August 22, 2013

My Gift Comments

Rating: 4.9

Backwaters whispered in my ears
A song of lust, love and lustrous
Palm leaves repeated the lines
To exchange a gift for my Princess
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Jennifer Birchall 17 February 2019

A beautifully expressed poem Sekharan, I loved it.

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Rajnish Manga 02 April 2017

The imagery and the narrative create a magic in the form of lovely romantic atmosphere which is witness to a grand alliance of two lovers. Great poem. Thanks.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 11 April 2016

its a melody played by a noble flutist, awestruck by the flow of words, thanks poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 March 2016

As a token. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2016

A gift of love with the joy of the heart! Thanks for sharing.

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Allotey Abossey 21 June 2015

Decisions are in our power and will to control

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Bakuli Bhakali 30 May 2015

A loving heart is aptly poured....

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Vi Nhat Thuy 23 May 2015

'Mountains smiled slightly pouring snow Dale hugged in surprise with flowers Sky screened in blue with rainbow Wind embarrassed me slightly and tightly ' how these lines could expresse one's thought so beautifully! thanks Sekhara Pookkat!

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 May 2015

When heart is filled with love a torrent flow starts from the inner soul without knowing anything in front of me.

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Stay away from the backwaters lest they tempt you again With the mind willing and body wanting And fail in the real bargain....... Thought provoking and good poem Sir. I invite you to my page too for critical comments please

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 May 2015

I love all your comments and appreciated

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 25 April 2015

A lovely verse! She is loved passionately! Dorothy Singing Still

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Khairul Ahsan 16 November 2013

A beautiful poem of friendship and love. 'Her heyday of youth Made my old lyre active' And you played the symphony so well!

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Zandile Zoya 29 August 2013

lovely poem girl... big up to you # i like

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David Wood 27 August 2013

A deep poem with lovely lines expressing friendship.

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

With great depth of feelings so beautifully expressed for friendship day!

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Valsa George 23 August 2013

The love song played on your lyre is beautiful and the exchange of ring has sealed the bond! !

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Shalini Samuel 22 August 2013

Backwaters whispered in my ears The ring finger should not be empty/// what a touching and lovely line.. it melts my heart and whispers don't forget to comment..thanks for your wonderful words on my new poem.. thanks a lot

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Vishal Sharma 22 August 2013

a great friendship poem and a well versed msg too enjoyed reading it

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Heather Wilkins 22 August 2013

very good poem well written enjoyed

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Payal Parande 22 August 2013

something that flows like a stream and never stops giving never desires to receive anything in return that is pure love and sir every time i read your poem thats all i witness bravo sir

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