Friday, May 18, 2012

My Ghost Comments

Rating: 4.3

Take a stand and let me know
Which direction we shall go,
A nearer time than today
Shall not again come our way...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 30 June 2012

all of us have ghosts in life and you speak for us like you, we also fear the same thing wow.

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Amber S 03 June 2012

nice poem u have so many. u are a very talented writer

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Brian Skyers 22 May 2012

A very nice softening poem..puts me into a lull as I read.. beautifull.

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Arild Ertsland 19 May 2012

Very nice work here my friend :) You write with your heart and soul, and yes we need to grasp the opportunities while they`re there.Excellent work! Take Care, Arild

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Valerie Dohren 18 May 2012

Great poem expressing the need to grasp opportunities in life before its too late.

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Sossi Khachadourian 18 May 2012

Although its so sad but its not bad at all very well written and emotinal, i like the way you write my friend the real poet have to be at first honest and you are, Good job keep the good work up: -) ~ Blessings~

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Heather Wilson 18 May 2012

Wonderful poem, but the depth of it is so sad, Like a ghost crept out at night, , heartfelt work here, so well done. Such a touching read.

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Miss Darkness 18 May 2012

nice poem :) nice work

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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