Tuesday, April 8, 2008

My Ghost Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ill-timed leaves crumble beneath my feet
The warm breeze tickling my bare back
I feel you there enveloping my vacant core
Lost am I since your untimely passing
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Kim Schilling
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Herman Visser 20 August 2008

wow, i really really liked it. allot. in some way, it made sense to me. one of my favorites so far; ]

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Fay Slimm 18 August 2008

This is a wonderfully expressed piece Kim. Some beautiful decriptive phrasing, so very well done.

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Roger Cornish 15 August 2008

Oh my..this is what poetry should do..... Touch. Rogx

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Jay Junker 08 April 2008

Very nice, deep and intense. Emotional.

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Kim Schilling

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