Ill-timed leaves crumble beneath my feet
The warm breeze tickling my bare back
I feel you there enveloping my vacant core
Lost am I since your untimely passing
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This is a wonderfully expressed piece Kim. Some beautiful decriptive phrasing, so very well done.
wow, i really really liked it. allot. in some way, it made sense to me. one of my favorites so far; ]