Silent, dark and cold I am
To the outside that knows not
The glow within my shell
Trembling with a secret
...
Read full text
essence of life takes, when lines you wrote, captureour emotion...your Great....a 10/10
Romeo, this is really well written throughout the piece, and I enjoyed reading it
i love the imagery that you created with your words. as always, very well written. i like the dark to light feel i get from beginning to end.
This poem sounding a beautiful naration of your poetic mind. This amazing words bouquet connecting us, even we all separate in place and language. No Babel tower, we will keep in different but deeply understanding. And it yours, in your beautiful words called poetry.
that toucht me man i really like that poem you really talented
Beautiful love poem, Romeo. Fantastic. The images are indeed great the verses are melodious. Superb poetry
This poem touched most. Congratulation. I also thankful grateful to you for you for the comments on my poem. Please keep relation for all times to come. Yours Gajanan Mishra,
This is a very beautiful poem... The last paragraph of the poem gives a totally different view to the poem.. I really like this poem. Aditi
such a beautiful poetry... Last parah gives a diffrent meaning to the poem.. I really like the poem... Aditi
What a pleasure to read and plant my own other garden flowers that will bloom like yours and, I also feel the same like you!
Beautiful compilation, I love the last three lines in particular which brings new meaning to the whole poem. Keep writing!
Well said, kind sire. Truly a great poem that describes a peaceful scenery. Thank you for inviting me to read your poem.: D