Saturday, April 14, 2012

My Garden Comments

Rating: 4.7

Silent, dark and cold I am
To the outside that knows not
The glow within my shell
Trembling with a secret
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Romeo Della Valle
COMMENTS
Alaude Solus 13 July 2012

Well said, kind sire. Truly a great poem that describes a peaceful scenery. Thank you for inviting me to read your poem.: D

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Antonio Liao 11 June 2012

essence of life takes, when lines you wrote, captureour emotion...your Great....a 10/10

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Anna Haines 29 May 2012

I love it, its amazing :) thanks for letting me read it

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<3 Nom Nom Nom <3 05 May 2012

Romeo, this is really well written throughout the piece, and I enjoyed reading it

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i love the imagery that you created with your words. as always, very well written. i like the dark to light feel i get from beginning to end.

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Anil Kumar 02 May 2012

Lovely...The poem elated me

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I.s. Aji Ronoatmojo 25 April 2012

This poem sounding a beautiful naration of your poetic mind. This amazing words bouquet connecting us, even we all separate in place and language. No Babel tower, we will keep in different but deeply understanding. And it yours, in your beautiful words called poetry.

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Aksel Godtfred 21 April 2012

that toucht me man i really like that poem you really talented

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Valerie Dohren 21 April 2012

A very beautiful poem with a lovely romantic conclusion

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Justice Honey 20 April 2012

this is very pretty and heartfilled

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Hans Vr 20 April 2012

Beautiful love poem, Romeo. Fantastic. The images are indeed great the verses are melodious. Superb poetry

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Apphia Garcia 19 April 2012

i love the descriptions and what an ending

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Heather Wilson 18 April 2012

A beautiful poem, so well described, a pleasure to read.

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Gajanan Mishra 17 April 2012

This poem touched most. Congratulation. I also thankful grateful to you for you for the comments on my poem. Please keep relation for all times to come. Yours Gajanan Mishra,

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Aditi Khandelwal 16 April 2012

This is a very beautiful poem... The last paragraph of the poem gives a totally different view to the poem.. I really like this poem. Aditi

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Aditi Khandelwal 16 April 2012

such a beautiful poetry... Last parah gives a diffrent meaning to the poem.. I really like the poem... Aditi

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Barbara Nixon 16 April 2012

Lovely poem, beautiful imagery and very touching.

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What a pleasure to read and plant my own other garden flowers that will bloom like yours and, I also feel the same like you!

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Anita Trivedi 16 April 2012

Good job.......... i really liked last paragraph.....: -)

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Aminath Neena Haneef 15 April 2012

Beautiful compilation, I love the last three lines in particular which brings new meaning to the whole poem. Keep writing!

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Romeo Della Valle

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