Tuesday, November 10, 2015

My Gallery Of Tears Comments

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I see you had nothing better to do
And decided to come for the tour,
Then please, do come in, and you will see
Just how much pain one heart can endure
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Lora Colon
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Kevin Patrick 20 November 2015

This really stings me in a personal way, the way its written accepts sadness as something never ending, reading this I feel like you have really bared your soul in this and it comes out in an honest and heartfelt way, its an emotional rollercoaster to get through but its one that feels like I can relate. Your last stanza is heart breaking thank you for sharing, its something that makes me feel not alone.

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Jak Black 11 November 2015

Reading this poem made me feel a little weepy myself. The Wesh are reputed to be somewhat emotional so I can relate easily to the subject matter contained in this well written poem. As always great rhythm and rhyme. Been away for a couple of months but will read more of your recent poems soon.

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Seema Jayaraman 10 November 2015

Yes I agree, pity those who cant feel and empathize.. Tears such a perfect natures gift which converts the metaphysical to physical.. Converts emotions to the expressed visible.. And such a wide range can be ecpressrd. Thanks.

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Shakil Ahmed 10 November 2015

the title of the poem is very apt, nice thoughts, well-composed poem, thanks for sharing.

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