Thursday, June 15, 2017

My Future Child Comments

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My Future Child
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Elle Smith
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Christina Peraza 19 August 2017

Future child of mine, do not fear your mistakes. Life never comes to us, ‘gifted' on a silver plate. Loved that part! Thank you for this amazing poem.

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Elle Smith 20 August 2017

Thank you Christina - So pleased you enjoyed this poem! :)

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Elle Smith 20 August 2017

Thanks Christina! ! ! I am so pleased you liked this poem! :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2017

our life is foretold, through a veritable plan; choice we make, challenges, learn and grow, have belief in you, Keep love Honesty and trust………. Faith in the Almighty. Very nice poem.. these are the points i collected from your poem, . Like ur poem very much. tony

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Elle Smith 18 June 2017

Thank you so much for your kind comments about my Future child!

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Chinedu Dike 15 June 2017

Beautiful philosophical poem. Good work. Thanks for sharing ELLE.

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Elle Smith 15 June 2017

Many thanks for the kind comment!

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Tom Allport 15 June 2017

a lovely poem of what might be in a future life always loved by thee? ..............well written

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Elle Smith 15 June 2017

Thank you so much for your words.

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Rajnish Manga 15 June 2017

Lovely, fanciful and surprising. The challenges which a yet to be born child would most likely come across in this world. It is closer to reality. Thanks for sharing. I quote: Life never comes to us, ‘gifted' on a silver plate.

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