Your thoughts reflect on your face
as charms of dignity and grace
why are you so sweet and lovely?
If you are beautiful, you are mine.
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This is a lovely write Akhtar ji, engendering sweet feelings in all those who happen to read it, also a great encomium on all your poet friends! Sure, friends reduce the wrinkles on one's face! They are a source of eternal delight! Sure 10
Such a lovely tribute to your friends. The repetition of I love all things in the dark that shine is very melodious. Art can touch n capture hearts. Artist friends are a real treasure. A big 10.
What a poem! I was enchanted.............................................
This is the most charitable tribute to some very special friends who are 'made of gold, not of clay'. Thanks for sharing this amazing poem. Helpless! ....Yes, I am.... enchanted I love all things in the dark that shine.
Your poems can hypnotize anyone, Yes, I am also the enchanted one, why do you write such touching poems? If your words twinkle, you are mine. Helpless! I love all things in the dark that shine... .. lovely theme. As you are doing best in every aspect you are my friend. Beautifully crafted and shared.
First of all, thank you very much for this shining poem dear friend...all I can say is, Your poems can hypnotize anyone, Yes, I am also the enchanted one, ...thank you Akhtar