Tuesday, July 14, 2009

My Friends Comments

Rating: 4.0

sitting all alone
thinking about the past
now that its done and over with
it all went by so fast
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lindsay rose
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Omar Ibrahim 30 July 2009

well done! ! i give it a ten

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Obinna Eruchie 29 July 2009

Interesting piece about the bond of friendship.

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Noel Horlanda 16 July 2009

be careful of your spelling such as in the second stanza, were we all meat, should be met. Anyway the theme idea is good, it's all about bonding of friendship. At least a good write. thanks

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Timothy Hector 14 July 2009

reminds me of the group of close friends i had when i moved away. not even 1000km's could tear us apart. thank you one of my fave's. good to stop and appreciate your friends. i am going to call them now :)

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