Tuesday, August 9, 2005

My Friend The Blade Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel the blade dig into my skin.
The feelings of depression released from within.
The blood leaks out from my cut.
As I keep my teary eyes shut,
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Fernando Alvarez
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JJ Lockhart 06 January 2007

amazing poem...i can definitely relate to it...i gave it a 10...keep writing Peace, JJ

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Joan Zu 02 June 2006

I cant tell you how much i relate to this poem, its so close to home that it scares me. thank you so much for writing this, its helpful to me.

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Fernando Alvarez

Fernando Alvarez

Mexico City
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