Friday, November 14, 2008

My Friend's Story - Suggestion Needed Comments

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Daily I meet challenges
Challenges to stand high
I never deny for hard work
But together it leads me to pain
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Richa Dhodi
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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Take strenght from your souls. Disappointments always come in our way like passing clouds. Wipe them out with confidence; self-reliance. You will win......

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Gurpreet S. 14 November 2008

hey richa... nice one.. seems like it reflects your life and you've taken some wrong decision.... im not good at it but i feel we can give it a lil more 'poetry' touch....jst play around with words..

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