My Friend Of Misery (Prose) Comments

so nice i am really impressed... it impresing only

your thoughts are really beautiful.... superb prose

Dis is a great emotive epic and even d pensive feelings r sketchd in a splendid way.

feelings are nicely expressed, keep it up...

Hello Poetess, you are doing very good! Like the story just need more short, sometimes. But very well done!

if you repeat words the way you repeat is a weakness of a poem, you need a point of brevity -telling something with extra implication..you have a good hand, i like your style...

A very splendid and wonderful execution. One thing, i m not discouraging u, poetry should be as short as possible. that is why a poem of four lines can be elaborated to 400 lines. keep always it up.

Beautifuly depicted though it had a sad connotation to it but great non the less. Good work

It's wonderful.Splendid execution.

A dark story Sameera but well written if not a bit long. But you do write this style of poetry in your unique way, and it is interesting to read. I'd like to see you do other styles of poetry as well to balance your obvious talent out. Anyway well done!

One can easily empathise with the sentiments of the poem and especially its powerful ending.Fine piece of writing.

good work, it is dark and melancholic. But the length is somewhat long to discourage readers. I love this, but I love short poetries more!

Nice sad thoughts well penned. Good work Sam

Great poem! Loved it!

(HAND CLAP) it was a wonderful read, i loved the way you explain why you don't want to get out of bed, but you still do. Its some what simple...you have taken something as simple as sleep, dreaming, night, and day...then you turned it into such a marvelous poem. Great job Sameera Alshaikh.

well done, deep emotions and wonderfully expressed

beautifully and nicely penned.sad but the truth is always sad.no matter how hard we bound to our dreams but it not what usually happened in the reality. fascinating one~nb

A beautiful outpouring of deep emotions written with such ease, a delight to read and ponder on! Brilliant write, thanks for the invite!

every one on this earth goes thru the daily life's struggle...the path of life was is will never be easier for any of us...it is our will power that motivates us n urges us to accept the next morning day, hoping for a positive n energetic day....the loneliness is sumthing v feel when v dearly miss our loved one, the way u hav depicted in our poetry...this is however temporary n one has to move on in life, as time does not wait for any one....time once gone is gone forever.......TIME is like River, You cannot touch the same water twice, because the flow that has passed will never pass again.Enjoy every moment of Life...... overall a gud write......

A n impeccable write mirroring your sympathetic situation in full flow. If it is a reflection of your self then I pity you and pray God to give you peace of mind.