Monday, February 25, 2019

My Friend, My Secret Holder Comments

Rating: 2.8

While my feelings
Sinking in agony,
My innocent thoughts
Bearing the torment...
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Shakila Naz
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Jazib Kamalvi 27 February 2019

Write comment. A beautiful start with a nice poem, Shakila Naz. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kim Barney 26 February 2019

I love the part about the pen giving its blood (ink) . Very nice metaphor. You seem to have a natural talent for poetry. Keep them coming. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Shakila Naz 26 February 2019

Thank you dear.

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Chinedu Dike 25 February 2019

Well conceived and nicely crafted from the heart with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Shakila.

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Shakila Naz 26 February 2019

Thank you for appreciation Mr. Dike.

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