While my feelings
Sinking in agony,
My innocent thoughts
Bearing the torment...
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I love the part about the pen giving its blood (ink) . Very nice metaphor. You seem to have a natural talent for poetry. Keep them coming. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
Well conceived and nicely crafted from the heart with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Shakila.
Write comment. A beautiful start with a nice poem, Shakila Naz. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks