Friday, January 27, 2012

My Friend, I Should Have Said Comments

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He dragged me with him all the way,
and held my hand meticulously to make me stay,
and to appear like he has forgotten that he will never be alone,
but I knew that my place was his house, and his my home.
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Neela Nath Das 27 April 2012

Nice thought! The mesmerizing effect of dancing words wins the poetic mind.

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Neela Nath Das 27 April 2012

Nice thought! The mesmerizing effect of dancing words wins the poetic mind.

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Neela Nath Das 27 April 2012

Nice thought! The mesmerizing effect of dancing words wins the poetic mind.

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Life Goes On 16 April 2012

nice poem like we wanted to be like this, in havoc or in gain. like this line

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Neetha Sasidharan 17 March 2012

gud poem.....grt rhymes dude.......

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