Wednesday, August 20, 2008

My Friend, I Love You Comments

Rating: 4.9

To feel the soft breeze on my face
Is like the touch of your sweet embrace
To stare at the mountains so high
Is like your shoulder, where I used to cry
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Michaela Tatualla
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Shekhar Joshi 09 June 2009

Good work.........y keep it secret though........... beautiful work

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

Kinda makes you wonder about the last line, but that is not a sin as long as you know the purpose of the poem and its meaning. These things are contained in the writing and framework. Wonderful work. GW62

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Ency Bearis 29 August 2008

nice poem...great write.. Ency Bearis

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Louemile Escober 25 August 2008

are you the one in the poem? hehe, , nice poem.add a little more intensity

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Ibrahim Guadid 20 August 2008

Great poem full of heartfelt emotion.Congragulatio keep on sharing us your hidden love through Poetry! !

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Michaela Tatualla

Michaela Tatualla

Albay, Philippines
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