To feel the soft breeze on my face
Is like the touch of your sweet embrace
To stare at the mountains so high
Is like your shoulder, where I used to cry
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Kinda makes you wonder about the last line, but that is not a sin as long as you know the purpose of the poem and its meaning. These things are contained in the writing and framework. Wonderful work. GW62
are you the one in the poem? hehe, , nice poem.add a little more intensity
Great poem full of heartfelt emotion.Congragulatio keep on sharing us your hidden love through Poetry! !
Good work.........y keep it secret though........... beautiful work