My Friend Ana Comments

You've got what maybe you looked for: shocking pain, I know many things are true you point up the ugly world with an equally ugly tone..a fine master of the words trying to catch; bite; crush into the world. But I will say that deep inside what makes you write is all but.. love. I can feel the white hidden in this black, I respect your choise but hope to see you shine in orange more than white..I will not read you again today, it is too painful, sorry but if you have a poem to make me smile instead of cry please send it to me, i'll be grateful. Thank you for share,10