Saturday, December 3, 2005

My Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I awake in the morning
I think of your beautiful, sweet face and it makes me smile.

When I’m feeling weary
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Shannon Chapel
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Loretta Rowley 08 March 2006

Beautifully written! We should all have a friend we can feel this way about.

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Ivy Schex 07 January 2006

Wonderful! It is great that you have a relationship such as that.

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Moya Levy 31 December 2005

I wish I'd thought of this myself! You have summed up almost exactly my feelings! I have sent it as an E-Card! Moyax

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Cj Heck 06 December 2005

This is beautiful, Shannon, a lovely tribute to love. You have a gentle style. Again, a joy to read. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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Ernestine Northover 05 December 2005

This is a nice poem Shannon, but I think I agree with Herbert in that as it's a repetitive type poem, it needs a bit of something 'a punch line' or some sort of action to break it up a bit, otherwise a poem becomes boring, which is a shame as the contents here are very good. Love Ernestine XXX

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Herbert Nehrlich1 04 December 2005

Well done although I think you could (should) spice it up a bit. It would complement the images. Best H

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Rakesh Jaddu 04 December 2005

hey...its well written...and if its written for any particular person..he/she's lucky to have such a nice friend...

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