When I awake in the morning
I think of your beautiful, sweet face and it makes me smile.
When I’m feeling weary
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Wonderful! It is great that you have a relationship such as that.
I wish I'd thought of this myself! You have summed up almost exactly my feelings! I have sent it as an E-Card! Moyax
This is beautiful, Shannon, a lovely tribute to love. You have a gentle style. Again, a joy to read. Warmest regards and respect, CJ
This is a nice poem Shannon, but I think I agree with Herbert in that as it's a repetitive type poem, it needs a bit of something 'a punch line' or some sort of action to break it up a bit, otherwise a poem becomes boring, which is a shame as the contents here are very good. Love Ernestine XXX
Well done although I think you could (should) spice it up a bit. It would complement the images. Best H
hey...its well written...and if its written for any particular person..he/she's lucky to have such a nice friend...
Beautifully written! We should all have a friend we can feel this way about.