My Friend Comments

MY FRIEND is omnipotent He took me up from the darken. Where, there is no start, no end. like the creation where is start where is its end no one can ascertain.

Ruma, the first stanza is like a good and meaningful introductory idea, and it was an amazing twist in the end..well-conceived and well-composed!

Well written, great poem. Siya_! !

MY FRIEND is omnipotent He took me up from the darken. Where, there is no start, no end. Oh God! the poetess of your divine love may kindly be spared for sometime for the Dharti Mata. However the poem is outstanding.

A amzing poem I liked it.