My Friend Comments

Lovely, lively tribute to a true friend. Wonderful work.5 *

Simple and straightforward enough, rhyming couplets in the epistrophe form- addressed to her friend who is helpful, reliable and always there for her. A true friend. I like the metaphor of the umbrella in the rain.

I think in the second verse first line you meant to say when I am down and lonely.... Nonetheless, the poem is a sincere praise for a good friend. Kudos!

Mariann, Beautiful poem about friendship. Choosing the right friends is very important in life and sometimes make a big differences between success or failure in life...

Mariann, you have definately hit a home run with this gem. I treasure the beautiful rhyming and flow of your work. Keep up the good work.

nice rite about a friend...it is nice to have one true friend that will be thier for U no matter what.....I have one of those friends.....