Saturday, May 30, 2009

My Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please walk a while with me my friend,
Along life’s beach which has no end,
Beside its oceans ebbs and flow,
That special place where true friends go.
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Alf Hutchison
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Meggie Gultiano 18 October 2009

For God made every grain of sand, He made it bold, He made it grand, He made it thus, that you and me, Might wonder for eternity. ............... Wonderful verse...And I say Amen to this,

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

Lovely friendship poem.

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Muhammad Ali 09 June 2009

nice poem it is Alf........10

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Anjali Sinha 08 June 2009

lovely poem--nice construction a tenner from me anjali

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Keegan Coutriers 08 June 2009

A poem of love and hope that provides reassurance and comfort. Soothing words for the down-trodden and ailing. Well said!

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Bob Blackwell 04 June 2009

Lovely poem, nice thoughts. Bob

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Dani Bompard 03 June 2009

Reading this magic poem Alf, took me back to the good years and appreciate all the love and friendship we share. How precious these words are with such visual impact, keep writing my friend, you are special

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Seema Chowdhury 02 June 2009

very nice and lovely theme. thanks for sharing.

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Nangula Immanuel 02 June 2009

A really good piece. I love the flow, diction and tone. Very well thouhgt out and conveys a deep message of love, especially that born of friendship. great poem!

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James B. Earley 31 May 2009

'Friend - A single soul dwelling within two separate bodies.' (Aristotle)

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Ernestine Northover 31 May 2009

A very beautiful piece of poetry, woven with skill and great contents. I could get a wonderful picture in my mind reading this one.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 31 May 2009

We meet the destined person and make him a friend.....and it can happen even in ph............because God works in mysterious ways....... A Good Write........

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Stephen Raseona 31 May 2009

wow, i will be friend its not considered. i like this pieces it really remain of how Desperate we sometimes be of our friends.... more fire it touched me.

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As other poets have mentioned I took the walk with you and felt the ebb and flow of friendship divine. Under currents and bathing in God's Love throughout this beautiful piece of poetry. 10 Karin Anderson

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 31 May 2009

We are blessed to have all these G-D made wonders to write about and enjoy with a loved one. It reads like a Prayer - pure and so divine. A really wonderful write Alf, you never dip, you always soar and take us with you. Thank you Cindy

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Ravi A 31 May 2009

I was also walking along with you throughout and beyond the poem. A nicely penned verse. You are familiar with sea and you have taken it as the right background to sketch the theme. You are a gifted poet indeed.

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Sandra Martyres 30 May 2009

Alf you are a brilliant and very gifted poet, this love poem is phenomenal....different from the usual run of the mill ones.... I have read this piece three times - I cannot find the right words to do you justice...suffice it to say that it goes straight to may favourites....10+++ Sandra

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rago rago 30 May 2009

Friend is more gifted than any one.......he got love showering on him.......in poem I am more delighted to read how nice yur friend is gifted.........

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Carol Rhodes 30 May 2009

Alf, you are a true poet. After reading, enjoying, envisioning with ease the beautiful scenes and odors/senses shared at a beach, I realized my mind and body actually felt 'the real thing'. I was walking hand in hand with you, basking in the delicious day of true friendship and beauty. Very special, indeed! Thank you for being you and sharing!

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Eyan Desir 30 May 2009

A pleasure to read good write

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