Please walk a while with me my friend,
Along life’s beach which has no end,
Beside its oceans ebbs and flow,
That special place where true friends go.
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A poem of love and hope that provides reassurance and comfort. Soothing words for the down-trodden and ailing. Well said!
Reading this magic poem Alf, took me back to the good years and appreciate all the love and friendship we share. How precious these words are with such visual impact, keep writing my friend, you are special
A really good piece. I love the flow, diction and tone. Very well thouhgt out and conveys a deep message of love, especially that born of friendship. great poem!
'Friend - A single soul dwelling within two separate bodies.' (Aristotle)
A very beautiful piece of poetry, woven with skill and great contents. I could get a wonderful picture in my mind reading this one.
We meet the destined person and make him a friend.....and it can happen even in ph............because God works in mysterious ways....... A Good Write........
wow, i will be friend its not considered. i like this pieces it really remain of how Desperate we sometimes be of our friends.... more fire it touched me.
As other poets have mentioned I took the walk with you and felt the ebb and flow of friendship divine. Under currents and bathing in God's Love throughout this beautiful piece of poetry. 10 Karin Anderson
We are blessed to have all these G-D made wonders to write about and enjoy with a loved one. It reads like a Prayer - pure and so divine. A really wonderful write Alf, you never dip, you always soar and take us with you. Thank you Cindy
I was also walking along with you throughout and beyond the poem. A nicely penned verse. You are familiar with sea and you have taken it as the right background to sketch the theme. You are a gifted poet indeed.
Alf you are a brilliant and very gifted poet, this love poem is phenomenal....different from the usual run of the mill ones.... I have read this piece three times - I cannot find the right words to do you justice...suffice it to say that it goes straight to may favourites....10+++ Sandra
Friend is more gifted than any one.......he got love showering on him.......in poem I am more delighted to read how nice yur friend is gifted.........
Alf, you are a true poet. After reading, enjoying, envisioning with ease the beautiful scenes and odors/senses shared at a beach, I realized my mind and body actually felt 'the real thing'. I was walking hand in hand with you, basking in the delicious day of true friendship and beauty. Very special, indeed! Thank you for being you and sharing!
For God made every grain of sand, He made it bold, He made it grand, He made it thus, that you and me, Might wonder for eternity. ............... Wonderful verse...And I say Amen to this,