Monday, May 4, 2009
My Friend Comments
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how do u help someone u love
someone as pale as a dove
hurting beneath the surface
pain burning like a furnace
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Clayton Young
04 May 2009
I really love your use of vocab and the flawless rhyming that just weaves its way into the poem. Maybe you should show the poem to this person, Best of luck :)
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7/26/2025 4:29:57 PM # 1.0.0
tasha i kno who tht poems abt...its beutiful and i think she gets it now...ily...i miss u soo muc...10+++++++...love ya amy