Tuesday, December 2, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

lumbering is my mind on this high climb
sheltered by your limbs while lost in whims
pedantically climbing without good timing
trying to reach the top yet so afraid to drop
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Alexander Hale 02 December 2008

this is beautifully written piece of art. i loved the ryhme and the metaphor. +10 and it goes to my fav's.

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