Sunday, July 27, 2008

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short and matted wig worn with pride
eyes aged with equal parts unshedded self hate recycled into
self realization
recycled into, could it be? Love?
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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 July 2008

your minds eye can see a truth thats not so invisible it, like your matted wig is as plain as a the sun..........................eloquence flows curving the meaning, wonderful by the imagery, well penned,10+, thanks for sgharing

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Daedalus Labyrinth 27 July 2008

Very interesting poem. I love the imagery. Well done

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