Sunday, December 18, 2011

My Freedom(Sad) Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am standing alone,
Take me home,
And end this life of mine,
I have my knife,
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Poet of the River
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 December 2011

hear the call, And like the light in my eyes i just go... oh nice lines..10 you have to grow, with rivers flow line shine glow let with some one you go.......like it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Bella Hernandez 19 December 2011

wowz... amazing poem... something that i know Crimson Love would like... but for me i absolutely adore it... so much meaing and crying out for someone to come to you... ~Bella

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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