My Frail Boat Comments
My frail Boat is in the wild waters
The shores are away, far away
I row with all my muscle's might
Still the boat is going adrift
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'But the missed love of you When creates pain of loss in me I will launch again my boat seeking you Away, far away from all delights '...shows the indomitable spirit in you. very nice poem that ends with a positive note. Loved it.10++++
Thank you Anil Kumar for your encouraging comments
A day will dawn again A mermaid will appear And shelter me in her domain Away, far away from all miseries.....well expression on bright future. A beautiful poem so nicely xecuted.10
Thank you Kumaramaniji.During our journey to the God we may have to remain safe and sound somewhere meanwhile we may feel the love of God decreasing. Then again we need go in search of His full love.
Even when we are relieved of our miseries and mental peace regained by some unknown helping hand we are not satisfied.That is human nature. We again tend to take risks and to conquer the unknown! ! DPN cleverly makes out this human aspect. Brilliant poem.
No lamp of hope is seen From any island afar to shelter And anchor my wandering boat Till I regain strength to row and row ahead Never leave hope! Though your boat is frail, if your heart is strong, you can steer ahead and reach your destination! A beautiful poem! A 10
Thank you Valsa George. Thank yoiu for the encouragement
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7/29/2025 10:26:37 PM # 1.0.0
A very touching poem which shows that even if we have no hopes, we will continue to struggle until we obtain the success which brings pleasure to our hearts.
Thank you Devi for the appraisal