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Comments from Facebook friends: Maricela Ramírez Muy triste September 7 at 6: 23am · Like Shahid Bhutto oh.... realistic thinking in every artistes voice September 7 at 6: 29am · Like

From Facebook friend: Maricela Ramírez Muy triste September 7 at 6: 23am · Like Nur Meiyati Maricela Ramírez: thank you for liking my poem and leaving a comment. You really read this. September 7 at 10: 43pm · Like · 1

Some comments from Facebook: Anwer Sen Roy I have read two of your poems and felt a newness of feel, huge turmoil inside but calmness of tone and expression. Love to read more of your works. keep it up and stay blessed. September 9 at 10: 10pm · Like Nur Meiyati Anwar Anwer Sen Roy: Thank you so much, Sir. It's a great honour for me to receive your comment. September 9 at 10: 16pm · Like Anwer Sen Roy you are welcome dear. not you but your writing moved me. September 9 at 10: 18pm · Unlike · 1

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal : thank you for your suggestion, Sir. The story is about the girl and her secret and how she perceived religion teachings and the moral values of the society that embodied how she felt about something and life. In fact my poem is also about the adults: parents, teachers, and spiritual teachers. If they understood her mindset and feeling perhaps that day the teenager's soul could be saved.

@ Alicia Cooper: Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, ma'am. Nice.

And forever my guilt would remain in shrouded secrecy.. nice poem...10 it could been ended in way very friendly something like marriage to same boy then poem could give more joy

You have described the experience of many of young woman, but with such feeling; it really touched me. Wonderful poem!