My Forbidden Sea Comments

Your use of words is pure genius. This poem has hidden depths.

A very well written piece, vivid but sad and haunting, Lynda

Very vivid words flowing so clearly...very imaginative...yet so sad. You wrote deeply..from personal experiences perhaps,

Excellant poetic expression. Thanks for sharing.

Julian - So sad, that your silence is an infinite melancholy. My silences are restorative and healing. But you express your deep abyss so well, I could get lost in those depths. Well penned dear sir - Cheryl

A fine, pensive poem picture. You paint well with words. Warm regards, Sandra

wow! ! ! ! ! the way oyu write your poetry is amazing! ! ! ! i am impressed with your words and emotions that oyu put in your poetry! ! ! ! very well done! ! ! ! !

talk about substance. a classic in the modern day. a modern shakespearean. loved it! 10++

this is the poem that caught my attention! your metaphors are very godly! very good poet! an instant classic in my book! ! ! extraordinaire! I am one your fans. Post some more poetry a 10** in my book!