Wednesday, June 14, 2006

My Fondest Childhood Memory Comments

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Homework, said my teacher,
Is to write a poem,
About your fondest
Childhood memory
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COMMENTS
Barry Van Allen 11 January 2007

Dee, Maybe it's just me... but why does Angie Mae sound like a teacher?

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Alison Cassidy 29 December 2006

Dee, this is a very interesting read. My first impression was - a fear of writing and personal expression. Of course after reading your last stanza, I read it again. Now there is something deeper; something personal, familial. This is a mark of good poetry - to leave the reading guessing? love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 16 June 2006

I stepped into this poem and felt a real sadness, how then did I also relate I understand this feeling, Thankyou I hope that the years will heal you much Love Duncan

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Patient Spirit 14 June 2006

Cute poem. I would love to hear your favorite memory though..ah, ha! Caught ya! Thanks for sharing.

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