My Flowery Youth Comments
Youth is that fountain....which must one day dry
no matter how much one may try
youth does die
but in form of aging skin and balding hair
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After a long time, reading again the POET o ye poet 'o whither art yester's flowers' But a cherished and flowery mind nerver withers, as rightly said.
Well penned and true. What many an ageing person feels. Our bodies outgrow our youthful ways.
Youth is that fountain....which must one day dry no matter how much one may try youth does die but in form of aging skin and balding hair but the heart within remains youthful....till aging....is an age passed dream youth
Oh youth why did you have to come just to, simply pass by tell me why O just why!
Oh youth why did you have to come just to, simply pass by tell me why O just why! '...superb expression...5*****
'Oh youth why did you have to come just to, simply pass by tell me why O just why! '...superb expression...5*****
Inner age...outer age...How that gap widens with age! A masterful verse, Poet!
ph is showing y older poetry but not displaying newer ones WHO can say why
Oh youth why did you have to come just to, simply pass by tell me why O just why! ---[ that was so heart-felt that I don't think I will forget this closing--- 5 star rating
let youth be the comma of our life-------] oh, well said, yeps, well said! ! !
youth remains within we still need only watering what a youth we all have enjoyed....reading our past in your lovely verse ‘tis as if yesterday we were in youth... now 'tis worse... left in memories as in this youthful verse lively poems that lead us to the forgone days. tony
This is an excellent poem worthy of being called Literature. Top marks
You are sweet seventeen in your poem. honeymoon days are ahead. Suresh
Youthful life lasts for some years. Everyone grows older with wrinkles run crisscross on the face.... True feelings are expressed by the poet.10+ rated and voted.
The first three lines speak everything! A great poem dear poet! My pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece of work!
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Sometimes my actions prove my mind has remained adolescent!
All men are always boys...when they become inactive...still they play with their once alive toy ask any u may pl RL
I too still am and mentally shall remain R L