Wednesday, April 19, 2023

My Floating Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Although she is not the moon,
she seems to move like the moon does.
When the night is consistently dark.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Pallavi Tripathi 24 April 2023

Very well written

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Richard Wlodarski 23 April 2023

Love the whole poem...especially, the last stanza. Great work, Asim!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 April 2023

Simply wonderful piece Asim

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Anjandev Roy 20 April 2023

Brilliant work.....my friend.....

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Poetic Sky 20 April 2023

Yes me and my thoughts....I float in the universe of ideas, among the dim stars, twinkling when just the two of us are present.

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M. Asim Nehal

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