(my Flame) Burning From The Inside Out Comments

Poetry is one way to flush out your frustration, you have done it wonderfully through this poem.

This is a really good poem! I love it! You are really talented!

Very fine poem! I wonder if it wouldn't be even better if you shorten it just a bit? I think... and it' s only my opinion! ... that the last two stanzas could be cut completely. But maybe you had a strong reason for putting them there!

Nicely done. Passion of anger and the pain that goes with it. Great poem.

anger...wonderfully expressed...excellent...10

Flame of anger this flame is my beast.................... still it would inflame time again flame when begets flame by the genesis, ingenious write by the imagery,10+, thanks for sharing

IT NICE TO SHARE WITH PEOPLE YOUR PAIN IN ORDER TO ELIMINATE IT. GREAT JOB DOING SO BUT I HOPE YOUR HEART`S FLAME IS PUT OFF NOW.

What were you angry about-disappointments-we all have those or just misunderstanding your soul's dark side.pretty good this can keep one guessing for a long time to come.A ten from me.

Tie your demon down, that's what I do. Sometimes they come in handy. Nice writing.

i like this poem. but i hope that the flame goes all the way down.

Couldn't agree more. Thanks.

This poem is very beautiful. I felt every word.

I so get this poem! ! ! Very nice. You know what firefighters to manage flames that are out of control don't you? ? ? They start a backfire - a separate good fire - that burns the same fuel - but controls the danger of the original.... Hmmmmmmmmm

Some people have a flame that can only be put out by the coldness of the world, but u have a flame that is strong and all u have 2 do is control it. But u wont have trouble with doing that. Good write. Peace, Alan

Well, the least that could be done is to lit your flame into an ember for it to constantly have light to sustain life. Control it in the manner that it can not turn off or blaze into flame, either way could cause you pain. Keep it up my friend, do not die to cut the pain! . Great write, top mark.

Another nicely written poem, QOP.

A Flame that never dies...Share it! :)

Hey kid. Catch the rainbow and beat the flame. U can do it.

this is real deep someday when we meet i will put your flame out and u will never have to worry again. i promise you that!