Monday, July 18, 2011

My First Try Comments

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this is my very first try
submitting a poem online
don't ask me the reason why
I waste my precious time
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Noor Othman
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Hans Vr 27 July 2011

Very happy you made the move online. A very smooth flowing poem that is a pleasure to read. Keep posting your poetry. Well done.

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Spiritual Seeker 18 July 2011

Welcome poet...to a world of spirituality, friendship....looking forward to more of your poems! Great lines for a ''first try''...kindly comment on my poems in your precious free time..Thnx

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