Sunday, September 7, 2008

My First True Love Comments

Rating: 0.0

Within the first few moments
I knew I was yours
Within the first few hours
I embraced your sweet kiss.
...
Read full text

Kaity Larkin
COMMENTS
Brooke Luchich 16 June 2009

That is beautiful. First love is the one that stays with you. Great poem! !

0 0 Reply
Bonnie Collins 07 September 2008

This is so tenderly penned and filled with so much inocence that only a first love's kiss can bring, I can actually feel the heart beating inbetween the warmth of the given love to one another...... Very nicely potrayed... Bonnie

0 0 Reply
Kaity Larkin

Kaity Larkin

Bundy
Close
Error Success