Our true love showed when we first lay eyes on one another.
when i saw her she was like a like day break inside a railway tunnel
Like the new moon, like a diamond in the mines
She made my heart beat in a now-now time signature
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This.....this is the best poem I've ever read. It's so sweet and thoughtful and just....she must've meant so much to you. That's just....wow im amazed lol Beautifully done -Tyease
I absolutely love your poem. Very beautiful and it seemed sincere. I like the words you chose to describe things too. Nicely done.
Ohmygod. That is one of THE sweetest poems I've ever read. I love it.10 from me! XD Keep writing Compton! Peace and love, Lexi
Beautifully portrayed, best description of love I've read in a long time.