Saturday, August 2, 2008

My First True Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our true love showed when we first lay eyes on one another.
when i saw her she was like a like day break inside a railway tunnel
Like the new moon, like a diamond in the mines
She made my heart beat in a now-now time signature
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Compton Wright
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Steven Cable 28 December 2008

Beautifully portrayed, best description of love I've read in a long time.

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Master   01 December 2008

Thats a nice poem. Awesome.: -)

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Tyease Collins 12 October 2008

This.....this is the best poem I've ever read. It's so sweet and thoughtful and just....she must've meant so much to you. That's just....wow im amazed lol Beautifully done -Tyease

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Ashley Ormon 06 October 2008

I absolutely love your poem. Very beautiful and it seemed sincere. I like the words you chose to describe things too. Nicely done.

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Ohmygod. That is one of THE sweetest poems I've ever read. I love it.10 from me! XD Keep writing Compton! Peace and love, Lexi

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Compton Wright

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