Tuesday, February 20, 2007

My First Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pain was shocking
Yet left me begging for more
Laying on the bed
Underneath him
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Hollie McDaniel
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Charlotte Green 20 December 2007

Hollie, I understand what you have writen about, as something like this happened to me. Its a wonderful poem, you are very stong to write it. Love and Peace Charlotte

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LeeAnne Russell 02 October 2007

I was in that same boat once.

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Julie Rogers 28 March 2007

whoa! ...IS IT FOR REAL? lol

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Nikki Neal 20 February 2007

DEEP.is this 4rel? i just wanted to know

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