My First Time Comments

Linus-this is fantastic, especially the last stanza. I love how it shifts from tender to harsh-truly lifelike and skillful writing on your part! please check out my poems! Samuel Stuart Pennell

so descriptive and wow! never could quite see a birth so charming like the way u put it..thank u! ! feels like a tribute to women in a way word

Wow! I found this to be quite a beautiful write, your talent has blown me away, great meter and diction! Keep up the great work! !