My First Time Poem by Linus Kithinji Njeru

My First Time



We barely bonded, nine months in peace,
A time of calm, of quiet release.
In stillness, we shared the earth's embrace,
A simple life in that sacred space.

The days, they passed, too swiftly, alas,
Words began to slip, like whispers, so fast.
The feeling grew, it stirred within,
A yearning deep, to life begin.

My mother, caring, tender and kind,
Ensured I knew no stress or bind.
Her hands were warm, her heart was light,
She waited for my first step into the night.

The days grew nearer, the hour was close,
My vision cleared, the world arose.
My body strong, my spirit bold,
Preparing for what the future holds.

Her love, so tender, her touch so sweet,
Her valleys deep, her hills complete.
Her welcome, warm, her embrace wide,
She whispered, 'Come, the world awaits outside.'

And then it came, that fateful night,
The villagers gathered, chanting in sight.
My father paced, but none could feel,
What I would face in the world so real.

Yet only my mother, gentle and true,
Came to my aid, as I ventured through.
She held me close, as I took the leap,
Into the unknown, a journey so deep.

But soon, the warmth I sought was gone,
She could no longer protect, or carry me on.
The world was harsh, its lessons stark,
On my first day, life left its mark.

Saturday, July 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samuel Pennell 16 December 2008

Linus-this is fantastic, especially the last stanza. I love how it shifts from tender to harsh-truly lifelike and skillful writing on your part! please check out my poems! Samuel Stuart Pennell

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Amy Ludidi 16 December 2008

so descriptive and wow! never could quite see a birth so charming like the way u put it..thank u! ! feels like a tribute to women in a way word

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Joseph Duggan 01 December 2008

Wow! I found this to be quite a beautiful write, your talent has blown me away, great meter and diction! Keep up the great work! !

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