Tuesday, November 6, 2012

My First Sonnet One Sided Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

O heart! Resting in a cloud like breast,
Listen what says my heart in my chest.
Thy door close, thy ear and eyes shut,
Open them, Feel hear and see, the cut.
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Stevie Taite
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Valerie Dohren 08 November 2012

A lovely sonnet - well penned.

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Sayeed Abubakar 07 November 2012

Hi Stevie Taite, Undoubtedly you are a great poet. Your feeling is very deep and you have a true poetic sense. Your use of dictions and rhyme is fantastic. I adore you for this wonderful sonnet.

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Kelly Seale 06 November 2012

wow, I cannot write like this, this sonnet, this style... it's amazing Stevie... Simply Beautiful and Amazing! ! ! Great Ink! ! ; -) -Kelly.

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

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