My First Song Comments
(It is not that i love to write on pain and suffering it's just that after getting yet another attack of claustrophobia i was feeling terrible. The feeling was intense so is my song. It is not a poem but a song the rhythm of which i had in my mind when i wrote this. may be one day when i will buy a guitar for myself i will sing this song)
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wonderful wishes, wonderful song.i totally understand and i agree that sometimes we all do feel little grey, we all have intense emotions, even i can relate to your first song very much.beautiful song! ! ! ! .
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7/24/2025 11:54:20 AM # 1.0.0
nice rhyme and rythm in these lines...the essence of pain you feel well applied on them... well composed...thanks...10