My first words are forgotten
Just as the first step I took years ago
As the tire marks in the rear vision
fail to attract anymore
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Nikunj, your poems fill the whole atmosphere... they have such a nice feel about them plus you are a natural..i wish my first poem were like this.
Nik, this is amazing! ! ! What a great 'first poem.' Your works always amaze me. :)
Lost words but nw found.You now write with a touch of perfection.Foever keep the poetry fire burning.
Ah, those forgotten words, I wonder, so much help you to deliver a lovely one...congrats...and thanks for your comment on my poem too
So glad that you kept flying on the wings of those 'dead words, ' which is why we have the lovely poem. Thanks.10
HI There, Dylan Thomas wrote a poem at poetry, if i remember rightly....I love you words and the metaphors used to symbolise your thoughts.... very elegant and eloquently written.... will read the others suggested...K
We are the sum total of all that transpires throughout our lives, as is that first feeble attempt at writing poetry. Hopefully, our writing improves as we age, but it's imortrant to remember that first inspiration that sent us on our journey into poetry Very nicely done! Linda :) .
Great effort. Your words are as lively as your poems. They connect with the readers.
I dont know what to say your poems are so much from the heart I can connect to them easily i luvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vit A++++ and 10++
Everything has its first moment. You have captured it very beautifully. Nice description. Deserves 10++++++++
as the tire marks in the rear vision fail to attract anymore these lines kind of depict a sense of ennui, there is a word play on tire. every line is full of meaning, kind of Eliot like in theme, great imagery. very well composed poem. read it several times. Mamta
Flying on the wings of dead words The poem stays alive only when I see the threads I connect with the hidden life. -------- excellent stanza shared a great oxymoron.....fine quatrains with great interjections........10
memory taking back ya to the time when ya started to put thoughts in the form of words forming lines...good one.Winnie
lovely...your last stanza has amazing depth....10
Nice display of well thought out words. You have written out thoughts and brought them to life. Very creative and good to read. DC
we should always remember where we began :)