Wednesday, May 28, 2014

My First Poem Comments

Rating: 4.3

With every passing day,
and with every morning sun,
I lift my eyes and mind,
to the new world that has just begun.
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JJ Evendon
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Akhtar Jawad 28 May 2014

we cannot live forever, so live each day The poem is nice, we know nothing about the proceeding day bur we know all about the preceding day, our today should be passed in the light of yesterday.

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