Sunday, May 5, 2013

My First Lucid Dream Comments

Rating: 4.6

Why doesn't anyone come for me
why am I alone
I cry for someone
but nobody comes
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Dave Alan Walker
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Kanav Justa 20 May 2013

i love when i dream lucid, , , , you can control your dream in your own way, , ,

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R.j. Wynn 10 May 2013

I enjoy you poems, I can relate to so many of them and some inspire me, before I stopped here today I wrote STILL I RISE after reading the world famous version by Maya Angelou, I also had a witch dream as a child.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 May 2013

Yeah dreams r like dat at times. But u wrote such a nice poem with d allegory of witches n trees! Poetic twistin of d dream i must say.

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Paul Brookes 07 May 2013

Strange what come to us in dreams lovely write Thanks for sharing

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David Wood 07 May 2013

If life were but a dream we would all have nightmares! ! Nice poem Dave.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 May 2013

Life is a dream Dave, Good poem, I like it. thanks.

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