My First Love Letter Comments

Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.

Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.

Oh this is so beautifully composed with so loving words......Valsa.......one of the best love poems ever composed and I happened to read it ever.........10/10

First Crush, as far as I understood this is a description of first born daughter, i can imagine how she responded your love letter and how she has been responding it now. A lovely poem.

Excellent....that letter must be filled with beautiful selected letters_Soul

your one comment attracted me here/ a nice poem.thanx

great poem mama Valsa.

In tongueless eloquence height of poetic expression!

'Love at first sight' is just a notion created by someone for expressing the feel of love incarnate in its wild state. Anyway this love letter is amazing and the lady must be happy to have such a lover who can write down his feelings quite in a unique manner. Will you Valsa, now tell about the response he got?

The first love letter is always very brief. This poem is also a surprise from her usual ringing lines going long. New ideas! Well done.

What a lovely first love letter from him to her, with the language of the eyes! - I loved the lines I dropped my secret whim / In the alluvial delta of her heart! So, so beautiful, Valsa!

This is a lovely poem Valsa with good imagery, I like it.

First stanza creates beautiful imagery of experiencing love at first sight.. Nice poem indeed. Happy writing.

The desire to earth the emotion onto the page and deliver the message of love universally powerful and here a deftly penned account, I can relate.

The desire to earth the emotion onto the page and deliver the message of love universally powerful and here a deftly penned account, I can relate.

I don't remember ever feeling a love at first sight reaction but I can just imagine when this happens the heart skips a beat and the emotions runs sky high. Eyes then meets and love sky rockets. Hopefully the otjher person will feel the same way too. A delightful write Valsa.

Evocative with intense feelings weaved into a vibrant and beautiful write!

Language of eyes is very effective and penetrating indeed. Beautiful poem to evoke response. Thank you.

i hv never loved any one so i do not have proper feelings. simply say soothing write