My First Love Letter Poem by Valsa George
My First Love Letter
Sure, it was love at first sight!
I knew, her very sight ignited a spark
Burning my dark interiors
Like charcoal on fire
And sweeping me head over heels
I wanted to get rid of that burn
In tongueless eloquence
With the language of my eyes
I dropped my secret whim
In the alluvial delta of her heart
To nibble its way up
With its roots running deep
And waited for her response!
'Love at first sight' is just a notion created by someone for expressing the feel of love incarnate in its wild state. Anyway this love letter is amazing and the lady must be happy to have such a lover who can write down his feelings quite in a unique manner. Will you Valsa, now tell about the response he got?
The first love letter is always very brief. This poem is also a surprise from her usual ringing lines going long. New ideas! Well done.
Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.
Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.
Oh this is so beautifully composed with so loving words......Valsa.......one of the best love poems ever composed and I happened to read it ever.........10/10
First Crush, as far as I understood this is a description of first born daughter, i can imagine how she responded your love letter and how she has been responding it now. A lovely poem.
Excellent....that letter must be filled with beautiful selected letters_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/12/2025 12:19:44 AM # 1.0.0
your one comment attracted me here/ a nice poem.thanx