Wednesday, May 3, 2017

My First Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

i'm walking up mountain high
the road is narrow, the streets are high
oft love dwelling not so nigh
in the utmost dark yet clear sight for mine eye
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 15 May 2017

Walking in narrow road but in high streets expresses nice courage. This is love that allows to come up and up with positive ambition. At dark sight eyes still feel clear light. The road has ended. The street has its stop. First love has given many more experiences in life. You tell this with deepest bow with eagerness and feelings. You have recognized his name and he has recognized you. His name is God our beautiful lovely father of Heaven. Getting him near in mind is nice and feeling him is fortune. An excellent poem you have shared that brings deep emotion and love for God. Rating 10 for this.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 September 2017

Thank you so much, Mrs. Bhargabi, for your wonderful feedback. I appreciate utmost your words and the vote rating 10. Thank you so much from the core of my being.God's Blessings in Abundance

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 May 2017

First impression is the last impression. Thanks

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You're most welcome and Thank you for your review..

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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