Tuesday, March 6, 2007

My First Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please don't break my heart..
Please don't tear me apart..
I already miss you so..
Please don't go..
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Dan Jensen
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Esther Leclerc 09 March 2007

'My heart is... skinned', great line that. Keep writing. Esther : ]

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Anabel just Anabel 06 March 2007

wow really good really! ! ! it hurts so much when the one that loves you leaves you alone to aid the cuts the person has left...hope I make sense...but as time pass you'll understand...have you heard the quote 'love make mentals into poets'? something like that... anyways this poem was really good! ! I'll be waiting more from you! !

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