My First Love Comments

'My heart is... skinned', great line that. Keep writing. Esther : ]

wow really good really! ! ! it hurts so much when the one that loves you leaves you alone to aid the cuts the person has left...hope I make sense...but as time pass you'll understand...have you heard the quote 'love make mentals into poets'? something like that... anyways this poem was really good! ! I'll be waiting more from you! !