My First Love Comments

Now the ashes are turning into my love once again....I sincerely admire the phoenix.

Very beautiful images being built up in your poem, Arif. I love it!

Nice expression anf free flow 10....

Its soooooooo good,

A lovely poem! Wonderful poetic expression, brilliant imaginative faculty! ....My first love was burnt to ashes Like the phoenix....Loved reading your poem! ...................10

Interesting. Very literary, sir.

this one is awesome Asif, really great, I feel I could learn a lot from your pen that's for sure, this is an epic of a poem and you do the ancient hero's and gods justice with a piece that should last as the names quoted in this master piece Great! ! ! jon

Love poets were born when love failed and those succeeded in love wrote the same fairy tale and self same single line-they lived happily ever after. When first love fails it, as you tolled it rises like a phoenix or you may call it flowers from ashes with tears on their petals. To read such poems you need not fail in love but should have a heart to understand the tears. Nice poem Asif. My best wishes KAVIN CHARALAN Clarification: What is this list People who read Asif Andalib also read? Some poets' pages are having this list others are not.. If you know tell me.--Kavin

Lovely poems. Love really conquers all..

Wow this poem is very interesting and sweet.

Wow, I really like your style of writing here! Great job!

tis a very beautiful poem/ top marksss! ! !

Good....very lovely writing and idea.. I appreciate this Thanks for sharing! !

Memories well captured and put accross. great.

Greek mythology theme wow what a great way to write a poem

Asif, this says a lot with such few words....Big ups!

the greatest imagination.you are a brainy man.

You have the greatest imagination brother. nice work well expressed thoughts. go on.

Lovely Asif, very inspired and well written.

just great like a myth, genius Asif well done god bless u & thanks to share.