Thursday, December 3, 2009

My First Love. Comments

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From childhood bloomed youth,
And learnt lifes truth,
My first love sped fast,
And it was a painful task.
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anju addanki
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Emma Adamyan 06 December 2009

adorable confession of a lost heart. be sure, the very first love stays so wonderful coz it`s left in the past and never knew what`s everyday life. real love is what makes ur life more happy every single day... ur 10

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Indira Babbellapati 05 December 2009

a secret everyone carries within...

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Kranthi Pothineni 04 December 2009

Awesome my friend. The ending line was amazingly composed to give much weight to the overall theme. Liked this poem a lot.10 on 10.

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Jennifer Ottinger 03 December 2009

This brings back my own memories, and sometimes they are childish crushes, and sometimes the real thing. Please read my own poems. Thanks for your own poetry.

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Tanchanok Manokam 03 December 2009

Wonderful poem. It makes me shy. ^_^

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Joseph Poewhit 03 December 2009

Really beautiful poem of life and love - BRAVO

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