Thursday, June 4, 2009

My First Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Evening, tender evening...
I could feel the summer breeze
Touching my face, caressing.
Oh, tender breeze...
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Angel's lyre
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2015

Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! Romantic and full of desire. so is a real love experience. if we get a little bit of love we all will go on i life. we have a reason to live. thank you tony

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Akram Awadat 11 October 2009

fantastic poem, it make me feel what you write

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Afzal Shauq 04 October 2009

Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! ' veru much romantic and sweetly written poem..you said much in few lines..well done and loved it and let me say..you are doing a good job..a good poet you are 10/10

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

what a lovely piece this is.. very sweet indeed.. good to read.. you have written this with so much emotion... This is like a scene from a movie.. lovess shan

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 27 July 2009

beautiful piece, thanks for sharing

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this is good. i like your thoughts and words......sis

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 16 July 2009

beautiful love poem, thanks for sharing

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Sanjib Das 07 July 2009

It's a great love poem and you write it from your heart. Your poem's construction is quiet good. You prove tat you are a poetic genius.

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Sameer Ahmed 01 July 2009

First love is like a vaccination that captures a person in its herd and overwhelm the mind and soul of the true lovers....it is indeed a very wonderful feeling and you have written it very splendidly.....10

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Shekhar Joshi 23 June 2009

beautiful poem.......full of your love.......... great work..... ;) .......

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Josephine De Leux 11 June 2009

sweet as sugarpeas.

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what love u and me, me and u... ya ya ait is first love.. good imagination n feeling...10

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Eric Lopez 04 June 2009

Woaaaaa. this really beautiful poem, mmm I love it lol :) ye get a 10

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