Evening, tender evening...
I could feel the summer breeze
Touching my face, caressing.
Oh, tender breeze...
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Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! ' veru much romantic and sweetly written poem..you said much in few lines..well done and loved it and let me say..you are doing a good job..a good poet you are 10/10
what a lovely piece this is.. very sweet indeed.. good to read.. you have written this with so much emotion... This is like a scene from a movie.. lovess shan
this is good. i like your thoughts and words......sis
It's a great love poem and you write it from your heart. Your poem's construction is quiet good. You prove tat you are a poetic genius.
First love is like a vaccination that captures a person in its herd and overwhelm the mind and soul of the true lovers....it is indeed a very wonderful feeling and you have written it very splendidly.....10
beautiful poem.......full of your love.......... great work..... ;) .......
what love u and me, me and u... ya ya ait is first love.. good imagination n feeling...10
Woaaaaa. this really beautiful poem, mmm I love it lol :) ye get a 10
Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! Romantic and full of desire. so is a real love experience. if we get a little bit of love we all will go on i life. we have a reason to live. thank you tony