Monday, March 17, 2014

My First Little Poem Comments

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A starter perhaps,
or the last one
to begin with,
or the beginning of
...
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Elias Uddin
COMMENTS
Hans Vr 17 July 2014

`fantastic images. I am very convinced that this first drop has along the way grown in a majestic tree. This poem is so nice. Let a lush jungle of great poems follow. Excellent

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

Great poem Elias - very inspired write.

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Marco Angelo 13 April 2014

Hail to all first poems. really nice Elias. well done my friend.

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Paul Butters 12 April 2014

Excellent poem Elias. Great oaks from acorns indeed.

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Susan Sparks 27 March 2014

Refreshing poem. Great imagery. Everything comes full circle. New beginnings eventually come around to the end and start all over again. Fantastic job!

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Chuy Amante 17 March 2014

WOW! The was a tommy gun followed by a shotgun blast! Love it! ! !

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Mohammad Zafar 17 March 2014

True feelings...........awesome!

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