My First Kyrielle Comments

" A Kyrielle is a French form of rhyming poetry written in quatrains (a stanza consisting of 4 lines) , and each quatrain contains a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza) . Each line within the poem consists of only eight syllables." from Google. bri :)

Dear Kim, your poetic Kyrielle result is to this old poet a most large insult. You admit right in it that failure stings, and I need no pain a poem may bring... , so try it yourself, and i guess you DID, but don't push your style on this old kid. to MyPoemList bri ;)